Monday, November 27

Jaage hain

Jaage hain der tak hamenh
kuch der sone do
thodi se raat aur hai
subah to hone do
aadhe adhure khwaab jo
pure na ho sake
ek baar phir se neend mein
woh khwaab bone do

An inner vein, tugs hard and deep and heavy and chokes, stimulating an effervescence of unknown fatigue, that embraces all over, and makes me pause from the running, from the speed, from the travel, from life. Afterall am only a speck in the universe, acting a written part. Heavy and tired, let Him loosen my puppet strings a little bit such that I can lean on your shoulder just this once and rest my burden, cry silently listening to your euphony of unknown tales of love while my inner strength grows.
Let me be the withered leaf that lulls gently to the wind. Let me sleep, while I revel in this blind dream, relive bliss.

15 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Brilliant. Awesome post!!

12:42 PM  
Blogger Arti Honrao said...

Awesome! I am speechless


GBU
Arti

10:16 PM  
Blogger Arti Honrao said...

It really s...s how ppl spoil the essence of a really wonderful post by leaving advertisement. I saw one such advertisement where the blog author had paid tribute to his departed friend.

I think the word verification is a must.


GBU
Arti

12:14 PM  
Blogger M said...

Its just tooooooooooooo gooooooood !!

4:03 PM  
Blogger M said...

am now a fan .. so a regular visitor of ur site ..... :)

4:06 PM  
Blogger Incognito said...

arti : Thankyou so much. Yes I know wht you mean, but one of my fellowblogger asked me to remove it so that she could comment easily. She was not able to see the words clearly from her university comp. :)

meenu : orey touchings! :) Thanks da.
*hugs*

9:38 AM  
Blogger Dhandal said...

these lyrics touch my heart more than anything...
u surly hav a wonderful hold over the language...

4:49 PM  
Blogger Incognito said...

Dhandal : Thankyou. I see you've also posted the same song!

Thanks for dropping by.

9:04 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You have a new fan :)
Awesome

2:05 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The song makes me stretch my inner nerves and bring tears to my eyes not of distress, not of fatigue, but of something pure coming out from the depth of the inner soul. Your words describe what I feel when I hear the music of this song. An undoubtedly awesome and an sung beautiful description.

12:41 PM  
Blogger Prashant said...

The song makes me stretch my inner nerves and bring tears to my eyes not of distress, not of fatigue, but of something pure coming out from the depth of the inner soul. Your words describe what I feel when I hear the music of this song. An undoubtedly awesome and an sung beautiful description.

12:42 PM  
Blogger pritpalkaur said...

by looking it first site i thought as if you have written about me
good post !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4:24 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice song! This is example of excellent work by Mr. Gulzar and has been used very brilliently in movie Guru...

11:54 PM  
Anonymous Gurdit said...

Nice post. I like your writing. Your descriptions and metaphors were really well done. However, technically speaking, I think you probably overused commas a little bit. That's just my opinion, though.

Nice post nonetheless! :)

4:10 PM  
Anonymous Vijay said...

Xcellent.!! Really amazing to feel the lyrics this way.

I am all set to hear to Chitra sing again.

2:35 PM  

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