Undone
The traces of the corners of your smile
the touch, the kiss, all this while
just sum up your existance in me.
You are still very alive within
no more can I pretend
I confess
I am not me without you.
And the day turned dark
the sun sighed once but last
leaving me to face
a bleak empty sky
My soul screamed for
a thin streak of hope,
for your hand to caress mine
but all was left here
were the beach, the waves
and a lost footprint on the sand.
the touch, the kiss, all this while
just sum up your existance in me.
You are still very alive within
no more can I pretend
I confess
I am not me without you.
And the day turned dark
the sun sighed once but last
leaving me to face
a bleak empty sky
My soul screamed for
a thin streak of hope,
for your hand to caress mine
but all was left here
were the beach, the waves
and a lost footprint on the sand.
7 Comments:
*cheers*
ymdqnbvery poignant...
c'est tres tres bien ..... !
:)
Gapp : *cheers*?
Mttpublishing : Thankyou. Feel more previliged because you are writer!
Illusion : :)
San : Merci, mon ami.
@incognito:
Cheers as in great poem... cheering.
Cheers as in keep up the good work
Cheers as in toast for a good poem
Cheers as in one for the poem at ascendas....
I bet you get the picture... You can treat me at Ascendas, for this elaborate praise...
-GAPP
Poignant.
To bad someone already said that.
ps. get rid of the word verification, please, can't comment on word-verification blogs from college, the pic does not display, and no sound.
Sagaro : Such praises! Tankoo :)
Camphor : :) Tankoo
Will take that off.
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