< space >
Me,
you,
here,
there.
Moments,
seconds,
minutes,
hours.
Living,
hoping,
waiting,
hoping,
living.
Hours,
minutes,
seconds,
moments.
There,
here,
you,
me.
you,
here,
there.
Moments,
seconds,
minutes,
hours.
Living,
hoping,
waiting,
hoping,
living.
Hours,
minutes,
seconds,
moments.
There,
here,
you,
me.
posted by Incognito at 2:09 PM
15 Comments:
Simple and cute
Looked even simple than haikoo :)
hopin 'n livin ...
good one !!!
Harish - :) Thankyou.
San - I guess you can relate to it more ;)!
wow!never imagined 13 words could convey so much!
ought to be made compulsory reading for all those suffering from the phobia of 13:-)
yeah yeah ... lol !
Gumnaam - 13! I never noticed that! Just wrote as they fell into place :)
Tankoo!
San - :)
while(life(exists)){
//insert< space >//
experience();
}
Poison - ;)!
u ve changed the placing of words rite ? the previous one had that flow in it ...
Ya, that had eating , sleeping blah blah.. but i liked this better because it was reversible..
10 hours of movies and discussions and pop corns and spirits .... sad that you dint come
hi,
bye,
go,
die...
er... kidding... orey the flow le vandhuduchu... Good one there... made a lot of sense. :D
wondering why the huge void after "space"
Sagaro - Interesting..
Thankyou.
Gumnaam - Just a few more days, will be back with new musings. :)
Whole story in few words!
GBU
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