Tuesday, January 17

Lightning

Loneliness Struck me from all corners While I lay awake for you to come Darkness Was everywhere Staring back at me Spark Hope came rushing back. That you were just around the corner Light Then you came Lighting the sky, lighting my heart. Lightning Lasting only for a moment That too, to strike me Thunder My voice thundered back Sans sound Silence You came back to leave me.

7 Comments:

Blogger -Poison- said...

he came back to leave you...
a goodbye?

4:39 PM  
Blogger -Poison- said...

read ur post on gwtw. :)
nice one!
the facts abt its production were interesting!

4:40 PM  
Blogger Camphor said...

What is this moment of Truth?

4:08 PM  
Blogger the Monk said...

came back to leave me... Ouch...

11:21 AM  
Blogger Incognito said...

Poison : When I wrote that long time ago, Yes, a good-bye. For good. But you know, now, its not a 'he'. More like an 'it'. Ray Of Hope? New Destiny making false promises about an unknown future.

Tankoo about GWTW :)

Camphor : Long time. Awake?

Moment of truth . Well, to start with, there are some things in the world that we know and understand, but rarely realise. For example, Cigarette smoking is injurious to health. Smokers know this. But only when they realise, do they try stop smoking. And it takes just a moment. One moment to realise whether you are in love/out of it. One moment to realise what you have been looking for/what you have lost. One moment to define/change your life. That I consider the moment of truth.

Was I satisfactory :?

Monk : *sigh*

11:28 AM  
Blogger Camphor said...

Quite, madame.
That answers both questions.
So you wrote this thing a long time ago?
Isn't closure worth having, no matter what the pain?

8:50 PM  
Blogger Incognito said...

Invisible : Vicious cycle, eh?

Camphor : Definitely. A closure really gets you started. And actually brightens your day, because you put everything behind and ready to start anew.

10:20 AM  

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